第一次写雅思小作文,请高手给我看看有哪些不足,有没有语法错误!
第一次写雅思小作文,请高手给我看看有哪些不足,有没有语法错误!
The bar chart shows the percentage of different transport used work in London,in the year of 1990,2000,and 2010 respectively.
According to this bar chart,there were four mainly forms of transportation that including car,subway,bus and other ways in London.Drive is the most popular means of transport,which have almost 30 to 50 percent people use.
During these 20 years,it can see an interesting phenomenon,less and less people drive car but more and more people take the subway to work.As can be seen in the chart,there was a decline sharply of percentage of car from 50 to 30 percent between 1990 and 2010.On the other hand,the percentage of subway just occupied 8 percent in 1990.Howere,this amount had a huge change in the next 10 years,the percentage of subway improved to 32 percent in 2000,and it continued growth to 2010.
At the same time,the use of bus and other wayof transportation was remain stable.There was almost 15 percent people that take bus or choose other ways to go to work.