哭泣的冰泣零
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A Talk to Myself
How time flies!I’m leaving school soon.I really have a lot to talk to myself.
Luckily,my teachers are very friendly.Thy not only give me knowledge but also tell me how to be a man.And my classmates are helpful.We sharer happiness and sadness in our school life.
However,I’m also upset sometimes.I don’t take part in outdoor activities quite often because of too much homework.I know it’s not good for me.I’ll try my best to join in more.
I believe the my life in the future will be more and more beautiful.
这是一篇命题作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向,需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要围绕要点组织材料,确定时态主要词汇等问题,根据内容可知本文主要是过去时态和将来时态,注意时态和时间状语的搭配,注意条件从句的应用。写作中,应注意描述的全面性;语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
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