英语作文：我眼中的成功人士.怎么写

What kind of person can be described as successful in your eyes ?
Different people have different ideas .Some people may say the one who have
succeed should have a good job , face a warm family, or have a comfortable
life.
For my part,I remember when I was a child ,my dream is having my own
house in which lives my family, and buying a car which could take my family
to catch a chill.At that time ,I think if I could realize it ,I will be
succeed.
But through the life experiences ,I learn a lot from the book and the part-time
job .
In my opinion at the moment ,I think a successful person should satisfy the
conditions listed as the following: Firstly, he should contribute himself to
the society ,everytime when the society needs him.Secondly,he must be a person
who insists on his principle of being an upright people all the time .Finally,
If he could creat a good thing which could bring the happiness to the people ,
he will be succeed.
The above mention is just my opinions now, but I clearly know that the successful
person in the TV or Newspaper doesn't have all the conditions.