Dear Professor Frank Jason,

Dear Professor Frank Jason,
I am Wang Hai ,the chairman of the student Union of our school .I am writing to invite you to give a lecture to the students in our school on what to improve the English writing from 22nd to 25th ,September ,2011.
English writing have always been our headche and we're trying every means improve it but have little good result .It would be our great honored if you could come to give us a lecture on it .Enclosing in this letter is a time schedule for it .The school would cover the traveling and other expense.
Please let me knowing your date of arrival if you can come .Unless you have any questions,please don't hesitate to contact me .Look forward to your favorably replay.
Yours.
Wang Hai.
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朵朵369 幼苗

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答案仅供参考:第二排:chairman 前的定冠词the 可去掉.
第三排:what 改成how.
第五排:第一个have 改成has; every means 后面加个to.
第六排:honored 改成honor.Enclosing 改成Enclosed.
第七排:expense 改成复数expenses
第八排:knowing 改成 know; unless 改成if.
最后一排:favorably 改成favorable.

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dyghkjk 幼苗

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这是改错题,还是自己写的??太烂了。改了语法错误,会好些。但表达还是有些啰嗦。what to improve 改成 how to improve 时间我不知道到你要说的是这三天都要,还是这其中的某天,所以就不改了。 favorably--favorable knowing--know Unless--If 最主要的还是把replay给改了吧,reply。means improve之间加...

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