英语作文 要求写对旅游的优点和旅游时的注意事项

Nowadays, people like to travel a lot.Many people go travelling on their holidays.We can enjoy ourselves and be far away from stress or pressure .So,travelling is very good for our mind.We can also learn much when we go travelling.
However,there`s somthing we should pay attention to.At first,we shouldn`t litter ererywhere.we must protect the environment no matter if we are in our hometown.If we are travelling abroad,our behaviours can even represent our country.Secondly,you`d better not take nuch money with you.if the money is stolen,the travel won`t be very enjoyable. Thirdly,we can`t eat or drink too much when we go travelling.if we eat too much and get sick,it`s difficult for us to find the hosptal.the illness will also affect our travelling plan.
So,if you feel stressed or tired,it`s a good idea to go travelling.and we should pay attention to sth .
自己写的哦~怎么样啊~~嘻嘻

帮修改一下：
第一段是缺少一点逻辑滴。
Nowadays, people like to travel a lot, especially on their holidays. Most people think of travelling as a way to relieve our pressure and thus get us refreshed upon our ret...