有一篇英语作文,希望帮我改一改错的地方.

有一篇英语作文,希望帮我改一改错的地方.
My pet robot
I have a pet and you could think my pet is a cator a dog or a bind and so on But I was sorry to tell you that my pet is a robot .
yeah,my pet is a robot.Its name is BoBo. It is a clever pet .He has two arms and two legs!His body is orbicular. So he is very lovable. He like to read book. If you will ask me what does he know when he read book. Sorry,I have no comment.
Ofcourse,he was very like to sing songs. He can shing many songs. Only if you sing the songs, he learn to the song immediately.He learn every knowledge very quickly. So he very clever.
I was very love he.Also,he was very love me.
请把错的地方改正一下,谢谢.
请再11:00前发上来,在线等.
herodayu 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

lvkylie 春芽

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obot我不认识,你是想说rabit(兔子)?反正按您的意思吧
My pet robot
I have a pet and you may think it is a cat a dog or a bird and so on (怎么改怎么觉得有问题).But I am sorry to tell you that my pet is a robot .
yes,my pet is a robot.Its name is BoBo.BoBo is a clever pet .He has two arms and two legs!His body is orbicular,so he is very lovable.He likes to read books.If you ask me what he knows when he reads books.Sorry,I have no idea.
Of course,he likes to sing songs very much.He can sing many songs.When you sing a song,he learns the song immediately.He learns knowledge quickly,so he is very clever.
I love he very much ,and he also loves me very much.

1年前

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ysls1974 幼苗

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错的太多了...建议找人帮忙重写一篇..

1年前

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bbsland 幼苗

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"could",等应为现在进行时吧
.Its name is BoBo. It is a clever pet .He has two arms and two legs前面用“Its"后面干吗用“he”

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