英语小短文（仔细!）Everyone needs health and nothing is more importan
英语小短文（仔细!）
Everyone needs health and nothing is more important than it.but should we take exercise everyday?there two different opinions about this.
Some people think we should do exercise in the morning everyday to protect our bodies,because the loss of health means the loss of everything.so they take part in all kinds of sports such as basketball and tennis.
Some people think otherwise,they believe that even though health is important for everyone,but it is okay to take exercise two or three times a week,and it is needless to do it everyday for we have much work to do.
I think we should do exercise everyday though we are very busy now all day.because if you are unhealthy,you can obtain nothing.a recent investigation shows that people in the past is healthier than now,and with the quickening pace of modern life and fierce competition in modern society,more and more people have no time to join collective activity.
Although work is important for us,but should we neglect our bodies?i believe the number of people do exercise will steadily growing in the future.(以上是我写的英语短文,请大侠指点,指出其中的错误之处或不太合理的地方,或者是指出哪句话有什么样的表达更好,一定要详细,）
Everyone needs health and nothing is more important than it.but should we take exercise everyday?there two different opinions about this.
Some people think we should do exercise in the morning everyday to protect our bodies,because the loss of health means the loss of everything.so they take part in all kinds of sports such as basketball and tennis.
Some people think otherwise,they believe that even though health is important for everyone,but it is okay to take exercise two or three times a week,and it is needless to do it everyday for we have much work to do.
I think we should do exercise everyday though we are very busy now all day.because if you are unhealthy,you can obtain nothing.a recent investigation shows that people in the past is healthier than now,and with the quickening pace of modern life and fierce competition in modern society,more and more people have no time to join collective activity.
Although work is important for us,but should we neglect our bodies?i believe the number of people do exercise will steadily growing in the future.(以上是我写的英语短文,请大侠指点,指出其中的错误之处或不太合理的地方,或者是指出哪句话有什么样的表达更好,一定要详细,）
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there are two different opinions about this.
Some people think oppositely,
it is needless to do it everyday since we have much work to do
because you can obtain nothing if you are unhealthy.
a recent investigation shows that people in the past is healthier than present
join ----- attend?
Although work is important for us,however should we neglect our bodies?
in a word,i believe the number of people do exercise will steadily growing in the future
Some people think oppositely,
it is needless to do it everyday since we have much work to do
because you can obtain nothing if you are unhealthy.
a recent investigation shows that people in the past is healthier than present
join ----- attend?
Although work is important for us,however should we neglect our bodies?
in a word,i believe the number of people do exercise will steadily growing in the future
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