帮忙检查一下这篇读后感里的语法错误以及内容缺陷(初二)

帮忙检查一下这篇读后感里的语法错误以及内容缺陷(初二)
《极地特快》读后感
After watching"The Polar Express"
Christmas is far away for us,because it's a famous western festival.But,in many children's heart,christmas is a beautiful dream,it makes us happy all day.
"The Polar Express"is not only a movie ,but also a dream.The film told us a beautiful story:a boy still believed the “Christmas Father”,but he listened his parents talked the “Christmas Father”was a pretty lie.When the christmas eve was coming,he saw a big,long and golden train stopped nearby his house,he entered the train,and found many children like him.Finally,the train arrived north pole and had a very good times there,such as the christmas tree,"Father Christmas"and many little man wore the red clothes.After watching this film,I felt so magic and beautiful.And also I felt the movie touched my heart.
I love this movie.As we watch it one more time,we also can find many things in it,love and the wish.Never change.
柳月诚 1年前 已收到1个回答 举报

二十小盗 花朵

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第二行不能用 be far away for应用be far away from.圣诞老人英文名为santa claus倒数第二行can应在also前副词在情态动词后

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柳月诚 举报

还有吗?

举报 二十小盗

我觉得没了

柳月诚 举报

时态帮忙看看,都写混了。。。

举报 二十小盗

没写混,你在描述剧情用的是过去式,因为那是过去发生的.而表达感受是你现在的感受,用一般现在时没问题是对的
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