What do you want to be?英语作文

I'm of the opinion that Taiwan's students are pathetic because they have too much pressure in their lives.
Because they have to pass the Joint College Entrance Exam,they must study hard,To meet their teachers' and parents' expectations,they have to study day and night.But it's such a shame because most students don't know what they really want and what their goals in their future should be.So what should they strive towards?Should they only want to get the best grades and pass the JCEE?The answer is no.In my view,all students should calm down for a few minutes and think earnestly about what they want.

大致结构建议是这样的：
1.Everyone when he was young had a dream.
2.My dream is...；The reasons are...。
3.With my hard work, I think I may success。

题目意思：你想当什么？
你可以写：我想当记者（I want to be a reporter),作家（write),厨师（cook)，医生（docotr)..
接着：我为什么想当..如：因为这个工作很有趣（Because this job is interesting)
最后，可以写I like this job very much.