求一篇英语作文!求一篇英语作文：要求：以“我去过的地方”为题,要用到现在完成时和过去时,六十词左右,初二水平就行了.

I have been to many interesting places.But I love Shanghai best.Last summer,I went to Shanghai for vacation.Shanghai is a very beautiful city.There are many tall buildings,cars,amusement parks and people in Shanghai.I had been to a big amusement park,it was very interesting!And I had a good time in the amusement park.I had been to a space museum,it was very great.And I also went shopping in Shanghai.I would like to go to Shanghai again.
我已经去了许多有趣的地方.但是我最爱的是上海.去年夏天,我去了上海度假.上海是一个很美丽的城市.在上海,有许多高楼大厦,小轿车,游乐园和人.我去了一个很大的游乐园,那里非常有趣.我在那里玩得非常开心.我去了一个太空博物馆,那里十分地壮观.我也在上海购物,买了东西.我愿意再去上海玩.
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