关于国庆的英语作文!写一篇关于国庆的英语作文~60字左右……

In National Days,I went to the beach with my parents.The sun was so shining and the sea was so beautiful.I was so excited that I ran into the sea as soon as we arrived.Although it was in October,the water was also so warm in the sea.I felt very pleasent because I had not go out to swim fot a long time.So I sweam into the place that far from the beach.My parents shouted that it was very dangerous that I swim to the deep sea.I turned arround while I heard my parents.
I was happy in that day.
这样可以吗?
你是初中生?这样应该符合初中生的水平.好麻烦啊,还要考虑实际情况...