today is Tuesday ,I with my classmate go to the zoo
today is Tuesday ,I with my classmate go to the zoo
we are play the corsair and gun,at 4:00 ,I go home
do homework,at night 9:00 I am go to the bed a sleep,
I think I'll a good dream
请问这段英语句子有多少错点,只要求说错误的地方,请指出并改正