请大家看看有没有语法错误As a teacher,I have broad interests.In my spare

请大家看看有没有语法错误
As a teacher,I have broad interests.In my spare time,I like reading books.I think reading could enlarge my knowledge.Besides reading,I also like watching movies with my friends,such as 变形金刚,< The Smurfs > 蓝精灵.
Being an English teacher,I wish my students could be interested in my lessons and be able to speak English fluently in the future.
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whjiajia 幼苗

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I think reading can enlarge my knowledge
I also like watching movies such as.with my friends(不然是朋友举例了.)
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As a teacher ,I have broad interests.I like spending my free time reading,because I think,it can enlarge my knowledge.I also like watching movies like Transformers The Smurfs with my friends.
Being an English teacher,I hope my students will be interested in my lessons,and in the future will be able to speak English fluently.

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小风扇 幼苗

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不错,就enlarge my knowledge欠佳,knowledge不能用large修饰,所以不能enlarge,建议knowledge前加scope of,enlarge也建议换为broaden

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media_win 幼苗

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I think reading could enlarge my knowledge把could改为can,真实语气更好。

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menbian 幼苗

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爱女信 幼苗

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no

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