八年级下册英语书17页3C作文作文怎么写?

Dear Cathy,
As a mother,I understand you well .Mothers always want to make their children learn more.But our kids are very tired,do you know?They are under too much pressure.The following is my advice for you.
Maybe you should let children chooe their favorite after-school classes.It is good for their interest and development.You could also give them more time to play in the park ,to surf the internet and so on.You will find it useful to do these things .
Do not push them so hard.Both you and your children need to relax.
Dr Alice Green