想找人帮忙改一段英文对话英语的期末speaking test内容是两个人开饭店,卖相似的东西,但是一个生意好,一个不好,

想找人帮忙改一段英文对话
英语的期末speaking test
内容是两个人开饭店,卖相似的东西,但是一个生意好,一个不好,不好的那个店主去请教好的那个.从环境,音乐,气氛,管理,价格等方面.
ENGLISH CONVERSATION
A---生意好的
B---生意不好的
B:Excuse me.I’m sorry to bother you.I have something to ask you.
A:Oh,just speaking.
B:You know ,we are both restaurant owners .We sell similar kinds of food,but you do it very well while I don’t have many customers.So I want to ask you for advice.
A:Where is your restaurant?
B:It’s located on Chaoyang Street.
A:You know,location is an important factor of success.You should choose a place where is near the center of the city.It can attract many customers.
B:But my price is very reasonable.
A:How the customers appraise the cuisine?
B:I think that eh… just so so.
A:I think I can give you some advice about the appearance of the restaurant.You can decorate it as beautiful as well.There should be a restroom for the customers who haven’t seats and afford fruits and dessert to them.
B:If I should play a light music to make a relaxed atmosphere
A:It’s good!Waiters should keep smiling to the customers.
B:I want to know something about the management of your restaurant.If it’s convenient,can you tell me?
A:As an owner of the restaurant ,you should be kind of your staff.You can get some advice from them through the communication with them.
B:Do you think what another kind of sevice I can provide?
A:Perhaps you can provide takeout food.You also can provide some coupons to attract the customers.
B:Thank you very much.I have confidence to make the restaurant better.Can I ask you to come to my restaurant after improved?
A:Sure.Best wishes to you!