这个句子有语病吗?怎么改?One of my friends hasa brother who once was a g
这个句子有语病吗?怎么改?
One of my friends hasa brother who once was a good student.But as he graduted from Snior High school,hedroped out of school and played computer games at home all day because he didn’thave a purpose.But most of his classmates went to the college and have a goodlife now.
One of my friends hasa brother who once was a good student.But as he graduted from Snior High school,hedroped out of school and played computer games at home all day because he didn’thave a purpose.But most of his classmates went to the college and have a goodlife now.
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A friend of mine has a brother who was a good student.After graduation from a senior high school,unlike most of his classmates,he gave up the college education and played computer games at home all day without any effort for better life.Therefore,he has no backround of college education and lives a harder life.
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教室里基本没人,小明还在里面扫地.这个句子的语病是什么?怎么改?
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你能帮帮他们吗