英语改错my chinese teacher,mr.zhang,is in his thirties.he looks

my chinese teacher,mr.zhang,is in his thirties.he looks young for his age .he is short and strong ,and he likes sports very much .
he like（likes） singing and often teaches us song（songs） in our spare time.He also tells us jokes in class .
so we all like to have his class .（改成这个更好：so we are willing to attend his class）
whenever we are in trouble we will turn to him for help ,forwetreat him as our friend （he is like our friend）.
such is my chinese teacher （这句可以不要,改成We want to say ”thank you” to he.）and we all love him .
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My English teather is Mr Xu,his English name is Martin.His English is very good.And he always wears a pair of glasses.He likes wearing blue trousers.My teacher is handsome.He often plays with us after class.He often reads books and English.His hobby is reading books.Mr Xu likes drinking Coke and eating chips.Sometimes he is angry,because we are naughty.Sometimes he is happy,because we are good.Mr.Xu is very good and handsome.We all like him.Mr.Xu is very good and handsome.We all like him.
我的英语老师叫许老师,他的英文名字是马丁.他的英文非常好.而且他经常戴眼镜.他喜欢穿蓝裤子.我的老师很英俊.他经常在课后和我们一起做游戏.他常常看书,读英文.他的爱好就是看书.许老师喜欢喝可乐,吃薯条.有时他会生气,因为我们太淘气.有时他很快乐,因为我们很听话.
许老师非常善良,非常帅.我们都很喜欢他.

1.注意拼写,大小写..
2.我建议用He looks younger than his age 后面He also likes singing and even teaches us how to sing well in our spare time.
He always crack jokes in class so that we all like his lectures with relax atmosphere.最后一句 This is my chinese teacher.....