初一期末英语的作文,想问一下哈,像我这样的句子有没有问题,大概能得几分,求大家修改修改- -

初一期末英语的作文,想问一下哈,像我这样的句子有没有问题,大概能得几分,求大家修改修改- -
An Unforgettable Day
要求:1.What's the date?
2.What did you do?
我写的是:An Unforgettable Day
On 1st May.It was a warm sunny day.My father,mother and I went Zhengzhou zoo.
There were many kinds of animals there.We were seeing the monkeys first.Monkeys were not quiet in the cages.They were jumped around,and they made people laugh.
Then we were seeing the giraffes.They were quite tall,and they had long necks.
We took many pictures before we came home.We had a good time,That's an unforgettable day.
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以太网光纤 幼苗

共回答了23个问题采纳率:91.3% 举报

went后面要加to,
many kinds of应该是many kind of,kind右面没有s的,只有前面是all才有all kinds of
前面有there were了后面就不应该再有there了,there就是那儿的意思,你再在后面加个there是不对的,读起来也很怪
We were seeing the monkeys first.这一句你本来是想表达“我们先去看了猴子”的意思吧?你不需要用过去进行时的,应该直接用一般过去时,We saw monkeys first.这里的“猴子”前面不用加冠词,不用the
They were jumped around这句,“猴子”应该是主动地"jump",不是被动的,不加were
长颈鹿这里也是一样,用saw不用were seeing,长颈鹿前面也不用加the
表达“回家”这个意思不应该用come,用return比较好,用come的话还要加back,当然也是过去时态的,came back 或returned
得分的话我就不知道了,我没帮老师改过作文,也不知道你们老师的标准是什么,班里其他同学的水平怎么样
有不同意见的话你提出来咱们还可以再讨论,预祝你取得好成绩喽

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我觉得many kinds of应该对吧,如果用单数的话应该是a kind of 老师平时要求我们背的短语也是many kinds of。?不会是我记错了吧5555

谁都会有秘密2008 幼苗

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and I went Zhengzhou zoo. (应该是I went to Zhengzhou zoo)
只找到这么多,我们的教材应该不同。。。。

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冰点笔记 春芽

共回答了20个问题采纳率:80% 举报

there were和there重复了

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betty20050820 幼苗

共回答了14个问题采纳率:71.4% 举报

有初一下册的期末答案啊?

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醉行天下 幼苗

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went-went to
were seeing-saw
后面的我看不下去了,自求多福吧

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