英语翻译李明和他的同学上周日去公园野餐.他们早上7点起床,然后坐公共汽车来到公园.他们带了许多食物.李明的三明治是他亲手

这位的翻译是最贴切的了.
但是态度比较差.其实这样的用词很正常的,不要觉得没有用大词就是档次低.关键看原文本身的目的.
LiMing and his classmates went to park for a picnic last sunday.They got up at 7 o'clock and then reached park by bus .They also took a lot of foods .In addition,LiMing's sandwiches was made by himself and his classmats found them delicious.After the lunch,They began to sing and dance together till 5 o'clock,and then they went home happily
ps：楼主你这段话就跟看图写话似的 所以我怀疑你的年纪很低啊 只好用最简单最常见的单词了

Li Ming and his classmates last Sunday picnic to the park. They get up at 7 am, then take a bus to park. They brought a lot of food. Li Ming's sandwich he personally did, we all feel very good to eat. Dinner, we began to sing and dance together. They played until 5:00 and returned home.

Li Ming or his students to a picnic in the park last Sunday. They get up at 7 o 'clock in the morning, and then sit bus came to the park. They take a lot of food. Li Ming's sandwich is made by himself...

Li Ming and his classmates had a picnic in the park last sunday.They got up at 7 o'clock am, and then took a bus to the park.They brought a lot of food.Li Ming's sandwish was made by himself,which the they all felt delicious.At dinner,all of them began to sing and dance.They didn't go home until 5 o'clock pm.

Li Ming with his classmates to went to the park last sunday.They both got up at seven o'clock.and then took the bus to the park.They bring many foods.Li Ming's sandwich was made by himself.They all fe...

LiMing and his classmates went to park for a picnic last sunday. They got up at 7 o'clock and then reached park by bus .They also took a lot of foods .In addition, LiMing's sandwiches was made by hims...

Li Ming or his students to a picnic in the park last Sunday. They get up at 7 o 'clock in the morning, and then sit bus came to the park. They take a lot of food. Li Ming's sandwich is made by himself, everyone felt very delicious. Eat dinner together, we began to sing and dance. They play to 5:00.