The pictures present a very familiar sight in m
The pictures present a very familiar sight in modern society：in the first cartoon,a pretty,young mother leading her lovely little daughter hand in hand and walking down the street 30 years ago.In the second cartoon,nowadays,the elderly motheris supported by her daughter’s firm arm,with a smile on her face.And below the drawing,there is a topic which says:supporting each other.
Obviously,the artist’s real purpose is notthe pictures itself,but to lead us to find what hides behind the iceberg,that is, parents and children should support each other.First,for many adults,they received nearly all of their parents’ love and care when they were little boy or girl.About 87% of the parents said that theyspent most of their time and attention on their sons or daughters,according to a recent survey reported by the Oct.28 issue of Reader’s Digest.Second,it is a traditional virtue for Chinese nation to respect the aged and care for the young.
To sum up,much attention should be paid to the supporting between parents and children.my attitude is that when we were young,our mother and father cared and helped us as much as they can.Now,it is time for us to support them.Such as,we could help our mother when she is doing housework.Although some of the Chinese traditions are disappearing,one tradition should never fade away is that of taking care of the elderly.
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The pictures present a very familiar sightin modern society：In the first picture of 30 years ago,a pretty young mother leadsher lovely little daughter hand in hand and walks down the street.In thesecond picture,nowadays,the elderly mother is supported by her daughter’sfirm arm,with a smile on her face.And below these drawings,there is a topic:supporting each other.
Obviously,the real purpose ofthe artist is not the pictures itself,but to lead us to find what hides behindthem,that is,parents and children should support each other.Firstly,for many adults,they received nearly all of their parents’ love and carewhen they were little boys or girls.About 87% of the parents said that they spentmost of their time and paid attention on their sons or daughters,according toa recent survey reported by the Oct.28 issue of Reader’s Digest.Second,it isa traditional virtue for Chinese to respect the aged and care for the young.
To sum up,much attentionshould be paid to the supporting between parents and children.My attitude isthat when we were young,our parent cared for and helped us as much as they can.Now,it is time for us to return them.Such as,we could help our mother dohouseworks.Although some of the Chinese traditional virtue are determining,one tradition that should be never faded away is that of taking care of theelderly.
The pictures present a very familiar sightin modern society：In the first picture of 30 years ago,a pretty young mother leadsher lovely little daughter hand in hand and walks down the street.In thesecond picture,nowadays,the elderly mother is supported by her daughter’sfirm arm,with a smile on her face.And below these drawings,there is a topic:supporting each other.
Obviously,the real purpose ofthe artist is not the pictures itself,but to lead us to find what hides behindthem,that is,parents and children should support each other.Firstly,for many adults,they received nearly all of their parents’ love and carewhen they were little boys or girls.About 87% of the parents said that they spentmost of their time and paid attention on their sons or daughters,according toa recent survey reported by the Oct.28 issue of Reader’s Digest.Second,it isa traditional virtue for Chinese to respect the aged and care for the young.
To sum up,much attentionshould be paid to the supporting between parents and children.My attitude isthat when we were young,our parent cared for and helped us as much as they can.Now,it is time for us to return them.Such as,we could help our mother dohouseworks.Although some of the Chinese traditional virtue are determining,one tradition that should be never faded away is that of taking care of theelderly.
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