一篇英语作文,tom总不做作业,给他一点建议

dear Tom,
I hear of you don't do your homework,I think you have some problems.I want to help you.I know that you like playing football very much,and you hope to be a professional football player.So you practice football instead of doing homework.It isn't a good idea.If you want be a professional football player,you should also work hard.Why don't do make a plan?Doing homework at three o'clock,and play football at five o'clock.I hope this idea can help you.
不知道行不行哈?可以的话,别忘了给我分……

dear tom
you don't want do your homework ,that's a popular proplem in you age ,but,you'd beeter do it ,first you must do it ,if you don't do it ,you teacher weil pause you ,and the student who do...

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