请为这篇英语文章找出错误.谢Good morning,my name is George,it is really a

请为这篇英语文章找出错误.谢
Good morning,my name is George,it is really a great honor to have this opportunity for a interview myself.
Now i will introduce myself briefly,i am 19 years old,born in jilin province ,northeast of china.I am studying in the jilin institue of architecture and civil engineering.my major is xxx.I like this major and I have full confidence in a bright future if only our economy can keep the growth pace still.
I have many hobby,In my spare time,I like swimming,ping-pong,reading,and also with computer games.what's more,I am good at analysis,so I like to read some detective fiction,but my spare time is quite few before I graduate from the middle school.I am very easy-going,enjoying a good relationship among my classmates.I get the energy from the person around me.But just like every corin has two sides.At sometimes I prepare for something.I just want to live alone.But the people among me misunderstand me."What's happen for you?"they also ask that.
Time reveals all things.you will know me better in the further.that's all.
如果不用“I”,我该将这个改成什么?能给于解决的话,我会在补上5分。
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lihui0707 幼苗

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a interview myself——改为an interview 去掉反身代词myself
full confidence——改为 full of confidence
growth pace still——still用词不当建议改为steadily
hobby——用复数hobbies
also with computer games——playing computer games with一般不用
some detective fiction—— fictions
among ——用between因为这是部分和整体关系
person —— persons
every corin ——coin
At sometimes ——去掉at
live alone——用词不当stay alone
among me ——around me
What's happen for you——What's happening to you
they also ask that——they also ask this 指代关系
in the further——future
当然文章中还有好多大小写问题,作为一篇自我介绍文章,建议别老是I……到底,换个词看看,否则大家会认为你的词汇量……呵呵,加油啊!

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