帮忙看一下我这篇英语短文有没有什么严重的语法错误?
帮忙看一下我这篇英语短文有没有什么严重的语法错误?
短文是这样的：Jerry is flying a kite in the park.He was very happy.But now he is surprised.Because the kite line is borken.He can not get.His classmate Mary come say:"I can help you with your to it." Mary stretched her hands.But Mary fell into the water.Jerry is very happy.
有没有什么语法错误,比如过去式,现在进行时,这些,我搞不清啊!
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是现在进行时，一楼，不是过去式，老师要求.
Jerry is flying a kite in the park.He is very happy.But now he is surprised.Because the kite line is borken.He can not get.His classmate Mary come and say:"I can help you with your to it." Mary stretched her hands.But Mary fell into the water.Jerry is very happy.
短文是这样的：Jerry is flying a kite in the park.He was very happy.But now he is surprised.Because the kite line is borken.He can not get.His classmate Mary come say:"I can help you with your to it." Mary stretched her hands.But Mary fell into the water.Jerry is very happy.
有没有什么语法错误,比如过去式,现在进行时,这些,我搞不清啊!
大哥大姐帮下小妹忙!
是现在进行时，一楼，不是过去式，老师要求.
Jerry is flying a kite in the park.He is very happy.But now he is surprised.Because the kite line is borken.He can not get.His classmate Mary come and say:"I can help you with your to it." Mary stretched her hands.But Mary fell into the water.Jerry is very happy.
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时态太混乱了,标点错误也很多,But这个词不能出现在句首除非用However代替,而且内容不妥..Mary掉河里了,怎么Jerry那么高兴啊?居心不良!还有,Mary stretched her hands,你想表达什么?看不懂..
其实一楼分析的很好啊,应该是过去式的,但是如果老师要求不要过去式,就全改成一般现在.
大致改一下：
Jerry is flying a kite in the park,and he is very happy.However,he is surprised now because the kite line is borken,and he cannt get it.His classmate,Mary,comes and says"I can help you." Mary stretches her hands,but she fells into the water.Jerry feels funny.
其实一楼分析的很好啊,应该是过去式的,但是如果老师要求不要过去式,就全改成一般现在.
大致改一下：
Jerry is flying a kite in the park,and he is very happy.However,he is surprised now because the kite line is borken,and he cannt get it.His classmate,Mary,comes and says"I can help you." Mary stretches her hands,but she fells into the water.Jerry feels funny.
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