谁能帮我翻译成英文,：错误：1：句首第一个字母Y要大写2；既然Yes后面用了句号,后面的i又要大写,如果用逗号就不用了3

Error:
1:The first sentence should be capitalized the first letter Y
2; Since the end of Yes use period ,the later i should be capitalized,or use a comma .
3:At the end of the sentence should has punctuation
I hope to correct these problems.

1.The first alphabet "y" should be capitalised;
2. There's a period after "yes", so is "i" after "yes".还有错误：

Mistakes

1：句首第一个字母Y要大写

1. The first alphabet &q...