cara880
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一楼的错误远不止如此啊.修改如下
1:第一句后面部分改成:your football skill is getting better and better!
2: 第二句后面的more and more better是严重的语法错误.可改成:Thanks Mom, I will be the best in the future!
3: 第四句后面的becoming是错的,二楼已经修改了.
4. 后面 部分表达非常不地道.可改成: I'll back you up~
综合改为下面对话
M:My dear little Tom,your football skill is getting better and better!
T:Thanks Mom, I will be the best in the future!
M:Why are you so confident?
T:Because my dream is to become a professional football player and I can play for Chelsea.
M:Oh,my dear, I'll back you up~
T:Thank you mum.
PS:楼主已经说明必须要昨晚弄好,不过看到这么明显的语法错误,还是忍不住上来改下,希望对以后看到的人有帮助吧~~~
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