朋友们帮忙看看这篇简单的英语日记有没有错误.

朋友们帮忙看看这篇简单的英语日记有没有错误.
August 9th Thursday Sunny
I want to go to home,I miss my mother、my friend and live that city.What are they doing?Happy or unhappy?
8月19号 星期三 晴
我想回家,我想我的妈妈、我的朋友和我所居住的城市.他们在干什么呢?快乐不快乐.
如果有请告诉我错在那，为什么？
带我离开 1年前 已收到9个回答 举报
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荠菜 幼苗

共回答了12个问题采纳率：100% 举报

19th August Wednesday Fine
I want to go home. I miss my mother, my friends and the city I lived. What are they doing? Happy or unhappy?

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wwwsicnu 幼苗

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I miss my mother、my friend and live that city有问题"I miss my mother ,my friend and the city which I live."

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hotmail 幼苗

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I want to go to home 不对 去掉第二个to
I miss my mother、my friend and live that city 改成 I miss my mother、my friends ande the city I lived in.
Happy or unhappy?
改成 Are they happy or unhappy.
日期19th August Wednesday Fine

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chenzhong678 幼苗

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19th August, Wednesday, Sunny
I want to go home. I miss my Mum, my friends and the city I lived. What are they doing now? Happy or not?

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3998139 幼苗

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I want to go to home,I miss my mother、my friend and the city in which I was brought up. What are they doing?Happy or not?

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jingu_st 幼苗

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1.go home 是短语,中间不能加介词to.因为home在此是副词.除此之外还有go there/here ...
2.I miss my mum,my fridend and the city (where I live)你的句子中主语是我.谓语是想念,我的母亲,朋友是想念的宾语. and 是一个连词,连接两个相同的成分.如:run and jump,singing and danc...

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caco3110120 幼苗

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August 9th ,Thursday ,Sunny
live that city=====the city I lived
所居住的城市应为the city I lived，不可,I miss live that city.一个句子中不能有两个动词

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zengguangjj 幼苗

共回答了154个问题 举报

August 9th ---August 19th
I want to go to home--I want to go home
live that city--the city that I lived

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lu3198267 幼苗

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and live that 改为the city where I lived .
就这个错误。

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