2010年8月18日的这笔电汇,你把我的银行帐户收款人的名字写错了,我的银行帐号名字是李红,你写成了李艳,烦请你到汇款银

About the T/T on Aug.18th,2010,beneficiary's name is wrong.It should be"Li Hong".But you made it "Li Yan".
Please kindly provide your bank with the correct beneficiary's information or I'll not be able to get the money.
应该是做外贸的吧.我的客人也经常这样弄错.每次都发这样的邮件.其实你说的有些可以省略,只要把意思表达清楚就好了.

As for the remittance on Aug.18,2010, you've made a mistake on the payee name of the bank account. My bank account's payee name is Li Hong but you made to Li Yan. So please go to the remitting bank to modify it to my correct name, otherwise my receving bank would remit it back.