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My family members are：father,mother,sister and i.My father is a business man.My mother is a housewife,my sister and i are students,we are 1studying at 2Middle School.My father is very busy every day.My mother is good at cooking,When we get home,my mother always 3makes some delicious food for us.I love it very much.My mother said:' balanced diet can make us more and more 4healthy.'My sister likes watching TV.I do,too.(这个地方最好用so do i,更通顺一些)So we are 5wearing glasses.I look like my mother,and my sister 6looks like my father.We like going shopping.We think it's interesting and relaxing.My sister 7loves singing,and she can sing very well,so she wants to be a singer,but i want to be an actor,my father wants to be a doctor,and my mother wants to be a reporter.I like eating fruits very much.I eat fruits every day.My favorite fruits are：cherry,mango,orange and strawberry.My father likes eating meat very much,so he is a little heavy,but my mom is thin.This is my family.I love my family.
没什么大问题,小错一大堆,
注意第三人称单数后加s.
改了的地方我标上了数字.

1.So we are wear glasses应该是So we wear glasses
2.my father want to be a doctor,and my mother want to be a reporter应该是my father want me to be a doctor,and my mother want me to be a reporter
3.最后一句再加上“I love my family very much."更好些

we are study at the Middle School. 去掉are
I do,too.改成 so do I更好
So we are wear glasses. 去掉are
my sister look likes my father ,look后面加s.第三人称单数形式．
so he is a little heavy,
heavy改成f...

study--studying / heath--heathy / my sister look likes my father--my sister looks like /we are wear glasses--we wear glasses/

首先说下你的文章,你应该一个人一个人地说.哪有这样写文章的.