请帮忙看一下这个英文简历中的自我评价有无问题

你写的这个问题好像比较严重,我看了你的大体意思,给了一个差不多的：
I am a totally committed individual with pride in being direct,spontaneous,and communicative.
Accepting challenges is the foundation of my lige experiences and something I do with confidence.
Besides,I have the quickness of mind and efficency to complete assigned tasks on time.
From past experience and education,I have acquired persuasive techniques that are needed for a company.My teamwork skill are developed and have allowed me to corperate with different kinds of people.
I also have a special talent for matching clothes,and I am always highly sensitive to colours and fashion.
如果没有篇幅限制,你最好能简要地加进你的个人经历来印证你的自我评价,因为只是自夸给人一种口说无凭的感觉.
我是英语专业的,大四了,楼主请对我的英语水平放心.
请楼主给分吧,我可是一个字一个字敲出来的哦!而且全部是我个人原创,不必担心撞车~

it's definnitly chinese English..

Have positive work attitude.
Work seriously and sense of responsibility.
改成：Having positive work attitude and sense of responsibility.
Ability to work well with others. Good communication ...

看不懂，学日语的

你写的很好啊，只不过我认为你的第2段可以再断出1或2个小段，这样停顿会更好一些