请英语好的朋友帮忙检查下语法,本人在做简历,英语比较菜,

请英语好的朋友帮忙检查下语法,本人在做简历,英语比较菜,
Occupational Skills:
Good command of Computer skills:skilled in AutoCAD,PROE and Office application software,able to program with VB languages.
Familiar with mechanical structure and working principle of compressor,thermodynamic calculation of gas,and mechanics calculation and check calculation of parts.Familiar with all kinds of machinery’s handbook and reference books.
Good mathematical foundation,familiar with professional knowledge about mechanics of machinery,design and manufacturing of process equipment ,refrigeration compressor,heat pump technology and automatic control.
Experience:
Participate in all kinds of research and development of labyrinth piston compressor,have rich experience of vertical,no oil,piston ring type and labyrinth piston compressor.
Obtain a patent license about oil removal parts,and another oil parts is patent examination.The new design of super piston nut come through the test,and replaced the original parts which is more effective and reliable.Tack part in leak test of seal in a subject research of maze throttling,and collect the pressure change data of leak test.
Rich experience of the user scene equipment installation and maintenance,and guide the factory test every year.
Arrange the file of finish product,and have certain concept on the product quality management.Suggest to set up product standardization of components for archives which control product quality effectively and improve work efficiency.
Personal Profile:
My mind is magnanimous,honest and punctual,and says it will do to keep the principle,not to shirk responsibility.
Easy-going and congenial,with a strong sense of responsibility and good team-spirit.
Being active,creative and innovative,with good analytical capability.
Strong perception and intellect,with widen and swift thinking,able to be quickly adapted to different environment.
Diligent,with sureness,fulfil my duties to my own work every time.Willing to learn and progress,and have positive work attitude.
Conscientiously,absorbedly work in a planned and order way and efficient,pursue the perfection.
Temperate,calm and steady personality,good at getting along with people,ability to work well with others.
The other qualities are preparedness to work hard,ability to learn,ambition and good health.
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快乐退休 花朵

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我就直接在这里给你修改了,
Skills:
1.A good command of Computer skill; experted in AutoCAD,PROE and Office application software;able to program with VB languages.
2.Good mechanical structure and working principle of compressor,thermodynamic calculation of gas,and mechanics calculation and check calculation of parts.good understanding in using machinery’s handbooks and reference books.
3.Good mathematical foundation,professional knowledge about mechanics of machinery,design and manufacturing of process equipment ,refrigeration compressor,heat pump technology and automatic control.
Experience:
1.Participation in all kinds of research and development of labyrinth piston compressor;
2.rich experience of vertical,no oil,piston ring type and labyrinth piston compressor;
3.a patent license about oil removal parts,and another oil parts is patent examination.The new design of super piston nut come through the test,and replaced the original parts which is more effective and reliable.Tack part in leak test of seal in a subject research of maze throttling,and collect the pressure change data of leak test.
3.Rich experience of the user scene equipment installation and maintenance;
4.Arrange the file of finish product,and have certain concept on the product quality management.
5.Suggest to set up product standardization of components for archives which control product quality effectively and improve work efficiency.
Personal Profile:
1.being honest and punctual,principle-sticking,Easy-going and congenial,with a strong sense of responsibility and good team-spirit.
2.Being active,creative and innovative,with good analytical capability.Strong perception and intellectual,able to be quickly adapted to different environment.
3.Diligent,eager to learn and progress,and have positive work attitude.work hard,ability to learn,ambition and good health.
你写的汉语一定有点怪怪的,根据英语的东东,我更看出好多的重复的地方,你都没有总结归纳,前面的东西虽然很多的专业的东西,但是仍然有改进的空间,由于不知道汉语是什么样子的,没有大的改动,只有最后的东西,删除了大量的东西,但是你还要修改一下为好.
注意的事
1.一级标题大概都要用短语,一般不用动词原形.也就是说大都用名词,形容词,非谓语动词等.
2.标点要注意.
3.标题最好全部大写,加粗,
4.简历要突出你的能力,你的组织能力,协调能力,适应能力,筹办能力,学习能力,文字能力,科研能力等等.每个都要用相应的事实来证明,
如组织能力,要用你组织或参与组织的活动来证明.
改的不是很好,抱歉哦

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very,only,single,such, last 等修饰名词或形容词来加强语气: That's the very textbook we used last term.这正是我们上学期用过的教材。 You

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