gogo56789
幼苗
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Great changes have【been】taken place in our school.When entering the school,you see a big garden in【middle】of it,with rows of trees【anywhere】.And there are buildings for teaching,experimenrs and dormitories,【that】are all equipped with the most advanced equipment.After class,we also do some sports in the【newly】stadium or on the playground.Every moring,the loud voice of reading【book】can be heard in the school.What's more,students can be seen together discussing some learning problems or【exchange】ideas.【So】 what appeals to us most is the smiling faces【in】teachers and students.We are living like mbmers of a big family.In a word,I【enjoyed】my school life so much.
除去标点符号和几个笔误(应该是“指误”),还有以下10个错误:
1.been 删除
2.middle 改为 the middle 或the center (center 更好)
3.anywhere 改为 everywhere
4.that 改为 which
5.newly 改为 new
6.book 改为 books
7.exchange 改为 exchanging
8.So 改为 But
9.in 改为 of
10.enjoyed 改为 enjoy
1年前
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