求高手汉译英 急我已经将简历（CV）进行了完善.硕士成绩和本科成绩一同附在简历（CV）里面,请您过目.我会尽快联系我的导

I would appreciate your time in reviewing my resume which has been improved and enclosed all prior undergraduate and graduate study.The recommendation will be sent as soon as I can contact my mentor Prof Li .I would welcome an opportunity to be your PHD .If you can provide a opportunity to me,I surely can diligently work repay!
你的中文感觉不是很符合英文的习惯.所以一些语序我在翻译里改了,这样会比较有礼貌,不过弱弱的问一下,推荐信为什么要后面才补啊,这样不好吧,应该要和简历一起发的.