帮我改英文作文Today is my first day to go to University.I woke up i

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Today is my first day to go to University.I woke up in the morning burhs my teeth,ready to go to take the bus,but this time the weather start to thundering,after a while started to rain.I bring my umberlla,before I go to take a bus to school.I start to talk to the bus stop.The weather start to be sunny and the rainbow came out.The birds singing.This time a girl came to me and ask me.Can you help me,when she was asking her eyes start turning green and her face start to be bright,and shes wing came out.I thought i was dreaming i slaped myself,It was hurt,I kind scary and i startt to ran away,but shes start to following me,she flys fast.she stalked me ,but this time my friend saw me and came to me,and that girl shes dispear when my friends comes.I thought this is all fake.After a while I forgot everything that just happend.
Next day morning when i woke upm.I saw a girl it's the girl thats from yesterday.I start to screaming.She told me to be quiet i wont gonna do anything bad to you.When she said that .I start to clam down and listen to her.She said I from another planet .I came to earth because Earth had too many trashes and the trashes air send to our planet .Our planet start animals and people start to besick and the planet start to die also.I ask her,even you told me all these things,but i still can't help you,because I don't know how to help you guys.She asked me can u think of any ideas to help us please.This time is 8 o colock already she said i have to leave i talk to u tomorrow and she left.
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Today is my first day to go to University.I woke up in the morning,ready for the bus,but the weather started to thunder,and then started to rain after a while .I bring my umberlla,before I go to take a bus to school.I start to talk to the bus stop.The weather start to be sunny and the rainbow came out.The birds singing.This time a girl came to me and ask me.Can you help me,when she was asking her eyes start turning green and her face start to be bright,and shes wing came out.I thought i was dreaming i slaped myself,It was hurt,I kind scary and i startt to ran away,but shes start to following me,she flys fast.she stalked me ,but this time my friend saw me and came to me,and that girl shes dispear when my friends comes.I thought this is all fake.After a while I forgot everything that just happend.
Next day morning when i woke upm.I saw a girl it's the girl thats from yesterday.I start to screaming.She told me to be quiet i wont gonna do anything bad to you.When she said that .I start to clam down and listen to her.She said I from another planet .I came to earth because Earth had too many trashes and the trashes air send to our planet .Our planet start animals and people start to besick and the planet start to die also.I ask her,even you told me all these things,but i still can't help you,because I don't know how to help you guys.She asked me can u think of any ideas to help us please.This time is 8 o colock already she said i have to leave i talk to u tomorrow and she left.

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wann0620 幼苗

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这是作文还是日记?第一段写太长了,有点偏题了。

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today is my first day to go to unibersity. after i woke up in the morning,i brushed my teeth,and i was ready to go to take the bus, but at that time it started to thunder and it started to rain after ...

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