I'm writing to tell you anything about how we students use t

I'm writing to tell you anything about how we students use the internet. As we all know it, the internet is palying a important part in our daily life. we often read news at home and abroad and learning foreign lauguages by ourselves on the internet.Sometimes we sent e-mails to our families as well as our friends.Besides, we listen music,enjoy films and play computer games on it. We can ever do shopping without leaving our homes. However, it has it's disadvantages. We waste too much time playing computer games, waht has a bad effect on our studies.What's worse,the bad information on the internet does great harm to us. I hope we can make use of the internet proper for our studies.(英语短文改错急谢谢)
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anything→something
it去掉
第一个and→or
learning→learn
it's后面加some
what→which

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亲,有十处需要纠正哟

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水平有限,我再看看

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listen→listen to

花心大萝卜GD 举报

还有三处加油哦

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前面有个错了,it's变成some,不放心的话变成its

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bad前面的the去掉

花心大萝卜GD 举报

还有两处~_~

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proper变成properly

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看playing前面要介词不

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不懂啊…

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那就加个on吧
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