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With the development of the modern society, what will our life be like in the future? Perhaps we can live under the sea and on the moon. People don't have to go out for shopping or see a doctor anymore. Thanks to the internet providing us with the convenient life. And there will be more TV programmes for people to choose from. People can also break away from the tiring housework and leave them to the robots. Then we will have more time to do other things. With the development of agriculture, people's diets will be much healthier. Advanced technology will improve our environment greatly. As for outer space, human beings have also begun making great achievements.

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