juanfei
幼苗
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Working Individually or Working in a Team
There are basically two ways to get work done. One is to work individually. In this way, people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it. What’s more, they will be able to learn how to solve problems on their own.
People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other. Besides, they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.
Personally, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them. As the work can be divided among several people, it can be done efficiently. Teamwork is always important.
这篇作文是讨论不同的观点,主要讨论独立完成工作和合作完成工作各自的优点,并给出自己的观点,所以文章要分成三段,给出的要点很充分,所以跟翻译句子差不多。但千万不能只是翻译,需要用恰当的连词连接句子。还有自己的观点要有理有据,要有说服力。写作时,要有意识的写一些复杂句型:如范文中的:People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each。这里有一个定语从句。还要注意文章的连贯。
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