语法改错When I was a student,I was eager to be a journalist.Ever
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When I was a student,I was eager to be a journalist.Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable photograph with a professional photographer who will assist me in finishing the task.And I will interview some people who was involved in some special cases .I think the day like that is delighted and the job as a journalist is admirable.In the meanwhile ,it will let me live an unusual life.
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第一句 when i was a student 可不可以把i was 去掉？
When I was a student,I was eager to be a journalist.Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable photograph with a professional photographer who will assist me in finishing the task.And I will interview some people who was involved in some special cases .I think the day like that is delighted and the job as a journalist is admirable.In the meanwhile ,it will let me live an unusual life.
帮我看看有没有什么问题 有没有什么语法错误 或者更好的说法
第一句 when i was a student 可不可以把i was 去掉？
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When I was a student,I was eager to be a journalist.Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable (photograph改成photographs) with a professional photographer who will assist me in finishing the task.And I will interview some people who( was改成were) involved in some special cases .I think the day like that is (delighted改成delightful) and the job as a journalist is admirable.In the meanwhile ,it will let me live an unusual life
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When I was a student(可换成：As a student), I was eager to be a journalist.
Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable photograph(改为：photographs) with ...
Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable photograph(改为：photographs) with ...
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