英语翻译原文：去外地上大学的感觉怎么样?兴奋,是的.大多数大学新生以前都没有离开过父母,因此他们对大学生活都充满着憧憬.

文章翻译的不是很好,原基础上的修改建议.
how do you feel about go【going】 to the college 【in other place 改成in a distant place】?【excited?】,yes.most of【the】 new 【加 college】students did not leaved 【leave】their parents before they go to the college.so they are full of the wishes to【加begin】 their college life.the challenge they will faced【face】 is 【加that】they have to learn 【加how】to spend on their 【time】.in middle school,they feel no need to 【worry】 about it.but it is different after go to the college,nobody can tell them what【them】 should do,they have to make a dicision with【by】 themselves and【加 they】 are resiponsible for their activities【改behavior】.
稍加润色的版本：
How do you feel about going to the college far away from your hometown?Excited,yes.most of freshmen are brought up by their parents with tender care and never leave their parents‘s sight before they go to the college.So they are longing for their college life. Yet one of the biggest challenges they will face is that they have to learn how to spend on their time.In middle school,they feel that there is no need to worry about the time.but it is quite different after they go to college,nobody can tell them what they should do,they have to make their own dicisions and they are resiponsible for their behavior.
freshmen 在英语中指 大一新生.代替new college students 比较恰当