怎样写旅游作文 英语的?关于描写山水和交通的英语作文,需要具体的写法 比如说第一步介绍地方第二步···· 主要是关于山水

Last summer,my family and I went to Hawaii for a holiday!
We flew across the Pacific to the tiny island from Beijing.
After we booked into a hotel,we rested.
Our fun started the next day and lasted for two long weeks.
During our time there,we ate delicious exotic food and drank numerous fruit juices.
The Hawaiians are very proud of their unique food,often 'spiced up' with slices of juicy pineapple and strings of delicious cheese.
There were also fantastic beaches right accoss the tiny atoll.
The water was sparkling blue and the sand dunes radiated with an inviting warmth of gold.
The place was wonderful and the locals were really nice; I really enjoyed my holiday.
我以前回答给宁一个人的.你也可以用用吧?