短文改错 快I’m a sixteen-years-old girl,presently attending Beiji

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I’m a sixteen-years-old girl,presently attending Beijing Yangguang Middle School.I fond of music,especially classical music but I’m also interested in photography because it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life.Thanks foe my hobbies,I’ve made many friends.In an actual fact,I believe we all need help from each other,I appreciate friend’s help,and I am willing to help anyone in need.I love peaceful.I hate any from of violence.I would like to joining the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp because there will is a great opportunity to make friends with young people from different countries and learn about our cultures.
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