短文改错,对下文标有序号的每句都进行修改,没错的不改1 One morning i got up early and w
短文改错, 对下文标有序号的每句都进行修改,没错的不改 1 One morning i got up early and want to enjoy the fresh 2 and pleasant air so i walked to the nearest park before 3 i arrved i found to my surprised that there were so many 4 people in the park men and women old and young 5 were doing exercise in various way some were runing up and 6 down some were playing chess and sword and some children 7 were jumping and dancing on the ground deeply moved by that 8 i saw i joined in them while chatting with them i realized the 9 advantages of sports especial morning exercises it can keep 10 us health and make our minds clear from then on i decided to do exercise every morning like an early bird.
1.want改成wanted,前后要一致,表示过去,用过去式。 2.before改成WHEN。。 3.to one's surprise,是名词,不是形容词,所以把SURPRISED改成surprise 4. people in the park men and women old and young 5.exercise改成exercises。 做运动。 ...