短文改错,对下文标有序号的每句都进行修改,没错的不改1 One morning i got up early and w

短文改错,
对下文标有序号的每句都进行修改,没错的不改
1 One morning i got up early and want to enjoy the fresh
2 and pleasant air so i walked to the nearest park before
3 i arrved i found to my surprised that there were so many
4 people in the park men and women old and young
5 were doing exercise in various way some were runing up and
6 down some were playing chess and sword and some children
7 were jumping and dancing on the ground deeply moved by that
8 i saw i joined in them while chatting with them i realized the
9 advantages of sports especial morning exercises it can keep
10 us health and make our minds clear from then on i decided to do exercise every morning like an early bird.
ghghgh1136 1年前 已收到2个回答 举报

iamsophia147 幼苗

共回答了17个问题采纳率:70.6% 举报

1.want改成wanted,前后要一致,表示过去,用过去式.
2.before改成WHEN.是当我到达的时候发现的,不可能是到达之前发现.
3.to one's surprise,是名词,不是形容词,所以把SURPRISED改成surprise
4.
5.exercise改成exercises.做运动.
6.sword>swords
7.THAT>WHAT
8.chatting>chatted9.especial>especially
10.MINDS>MIND

1年前

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liuyuxin912 幼苗

共回答了3个问题 举报

1.want改成wanted,前后要一致,表示过去,用过去式。
2.before改成WHEN。。
3.to one's surprise,是名词,不是形容词,所以把SURPRISED改成surprise
4. people in the park men and women old and young
5.exercise改成exercises。 做运动。 ...

1年前

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