一道英语改错题,急需高手们的援助!在线等.

一道英语改错题,急需高手们的援助!在线等.
Yesterday I went to a KTV room with some of my good friend for the first time.I was in bad mood the whole afternoon because I didn't do well the English exam.At the KTV,everybody sang popular songs happy except me.Because I was afraid that I couldn't sing well,so I dared not have a try.Encouraging by my friends,I picked up the microphone and sing an English song---"Yesterday Once More".Now I have become cheerfully and above all I've overcome my shynesses.I believe that the chief enemy in one's life is oneself.We shouldn't lose our heart just because of one or two failures
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杨家鱼儿 1年前 已收到4个回答 举报

spien 幼苗

共回答了14个问题采纳率:92.9% 举报

Yesterday I went to a KTV room with some of my good (friends) for the first time.I was in bad mood the whole afternoon because I didn't do well (in )the English exam.At the KTV,everybody sang popular songs (happily) except me.Because I was afraid that I couldn't sing well,so I dared not have a try.(Encouraged) by my friends,I picked up the microphone and( sang) an English song---"Yesterday Once More".Now I have become (cheerful) and above all I've (overcomed) my shynesses.I believe that the chief enemy in one's life is oneself.We shouldn't lose our heart just because of one or two failures.

1年前

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言舞411 幼苗

共回答了3个问题 举报

第一行的of my good friend 改为of my good friends

1年前

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canadian_cat 幼苗

共回答了1923个问题 举报

Yesterday I went to a KTV room with some of my good friend for the (friend -> friends)
first time.I was in bad mood the whole afternoon because I didn't (in bad -> in a bad)
do well the Englis...

1年前

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奶糖人生 幼苗

共回答了5个问题 举报

friends do well in happily cheerful

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