菜鸟用英语写日记（第一篇） 请大师改作业

Today is August,eleven,two thousand (and) thirteen.(可以直接写Today is Aug.11,2013.) I have been staying here for three months in order to study English (by) myself.(But) now,I found that it is so hard for me .for example,I can't (pick up the very basic English sentence).Although (没有逗号) I'm (using English) from morning to night everyday.But I don't recite any words everyday,nor do I read English out loud every day.I'm often (frustrated),but I want to master English soon (very much).(My) roommate said,'don't study it.' I answered,' what can I do '.'To do your the thing of the like.(可能你想说的是just do the things you like)' She said.
总体写的很不错·再接再励!loudly表示很吵·但是你想说的是大声读 你可以用read English aloud 或者read English out loud 我偏向后者 :)
做你喜欢的事情可以说 just do the things you like.

可以啊，不用改了

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