請各位改一份英語書面表達,（滿分15分）

請各位改一份英語書面表達,（滿分15分）
Ben是實驗中學（shiyan Middle School)的一名14歲中學生,請寫一篇短文介紹他11月的日程表,（滿分15分）要求如下：11月6日：have a birthday party for my birthday 11月16日：ART Festival 11月20日：basketball game 11月28日：English speech contest 短文：Ben is a student .His school is shiyan middle school .In November,he really busy .On November sixth ,he has a birthday party for his birthday .Ben is 14 years old .Art Festival is on the November sixteenth.Basketball game is on the November twentieth.English speech contest is on the November twenty eighth.Ben really very busy!改一下這個作文,給分,寫出不足.謝謝!