学霸们进来帮忙找找错误或提一些意见啊!
学霸们进来帮忙找找错误或提一些意见啊!
My good friends and I
I have three good friends.They are Tian Yunjie,Wang Yani and Han Xiaoyu.
Tian Yunjie is a lovely girl.She has long hair and big eyes.She likes drawwing but I don't like it.Because I think it is broing ,Wang Yani is a beautiful girl.She likes singing and dancing.I also like them.Because it is very interesting for me.And she study very well.Han Xiaoyu is a beautiful girl ,too.And she is good at playing the piano.She likes music very much.But she study is not very well.I am a quiet girl.I like reading books,swimming and watching movies.
I love my good friends very much.
My good friends and I
I have three good friends.They are Tian Yunjie,Wang Yani and Han Xiaoyu.
Tian Yunjie is a lovely girl.She has long hair and big eyes.She likes drawwing but I don't like it.Because I think it is broing ,Wang Yani is a beautiful girl.She likes singing and dancing.I also like them.Because it is very interesting for me.And she study very well.Han Xiaoyu is a beautiful girl ,too.And she is good at playing the piano.She likes music very much.But she study is not very well.I am a quiet girl.I like reading books,swimming and watching movies.
I love my good friends very much.
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你能帮帮他们吗