高分悬赏修改英语作文（改得好改的快有追加分）

高分悬赏修改英语作文（改得好改的快有追加分）
Did you hear the story about the HOU YI(后羿) ?He shot down nine suns .But this is only a story.The sun is one of the stars in the galaxy.The sun is about fifteen billion km from the earth. Too far away.If you go there by plane .It needs 20 years.The sun like the basketball.
But it is really big. The sun has a volume of forteen billion one hundred twenty million cubic kilometer. And the center of the sun is very hot. It’s one hundred fifty billion eight thousand and four hundred degrees.Can houyi shot down the sun? No. It’s too difficult to did it.But sun is really an interesting star.

咳咳,这是本人呕心沥血经过n个翻译软件加上自己苦思冥想,才写出来的,但还是有语法错误,请大家帮忙改一下,谢谢