不懂英语或英语不好的别进来!一个句子,请看一下有没有错误

不懂英语或英语不好的别进来!一个句子,请看一下有没有错误
I like singing,and I become a importantsinger when I grow up.
这是一个英语句子,请看一下有没有错误,如有,请指出来,并改正, 且 说 明 理 由!(重要的是理由!)
要求:用 a middle school student, learn, many subjects, after class, take part in, activity , like, grow up, important写一篇50~60词英语短文,就是写一下最喜欢什么课外活动,活动之你多做什么等。请大家在帮帮忙吧。(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……
azgmyh 1年前 已收到5个回答 举报

萱草印坊 幼苗

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1.importantsinger 应该是两个词,应该分开写important singer
2.原因;important 首字母发元音,
改正:前面的定冠词a应改为an
3.原因:在一般现在时中,有一种用法是:时间状语从句用一般现在时表示将来时态,
改正:所以第二句应该是 I will become a importantsinger when I grow up.

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azgmyh 举报

你回答时important和singer也没有间隔开来呀,为什么说了又不做呢?呵呵

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失误,纯属失误.........对不起.........

azgmyh 举报

没关系的,能不能再回答一下我另一个问题呢,我可不能让人能在追问了,请你一下回答清楚可以吗?谢了!!

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Now, I'm a middle school student. When I go to the middle school , I find that I have many subjects to learn.That's too tired! But no problem.I can take part in some activities to relax. For example,when I feel sad,I will play basketball.And so on.You can see, I like playing basketball.Besides playing basketball, I also like running and playing tennis. After class, I always play ping-pong with my goodfriends.I feel that's so great! I like playing sports,so when I grow up,I will become a professional athlete.That's very important tp me!Come on!

monkey004 幼苗

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a 应改为an 后接的是元音
important应改为famous意思比较通顺
become 前如果加上hope to, 则整个句子无论从语法上,还是从意思上都连贯了

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弦露 幼苗

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a改为an,因为important发元音

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dearyuren 幼苗

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有,important前是an

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mic360 幼苗

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I like singing,and I will become an important singer when I grow up
个人认为这里最好用将来时,或者want to become。important在这里修饰singer不大合适可以改成amazing或famous或great之类的

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