BEC 中级 的作文 我写的怎么样,
BEC 中级 的作文 我写的怎么样,
Dear All,
The reason why i whrite this letter is that I have just been informed that our company's computer system will be closed down,at 5 PM wednesday,to make an improvement .and because we will lose all the files in disk C after the improvement,we have to move all the files that is usefull to other disk.
After the improvement will could get a faster speed when using the internet,then we will work more effciently.
Best regards
Derek
Dear All,
The reason why i whrite this letter is that I have just been informed that our company's computer system will be closed down,at 5 PM wednesday,to make an improvement .and because we will lose all the files in disk C after the improvement,we have to move all the files that is usefull to other disk.
After the improvement will could get a faster speed when using the internet,then we will work more effciently.
Best regards
Derek
赞 honeyff 幼苗
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第一句的话有点累赘了哦
可以用这样一个句式I write to inform you that ~句式更加简洁CONCISE
~will be closed down to make an improvement at 5PM wednesday.我觉得要中间来个时间的插入语,这样比较好吧.
we have to move useful files to other disks因为all the disks that is useful 过于繁琐没有必要
你的商业只是可能需要进一步积累,因为没见你的letter的原题,不好做别的探讨,但是中级要求letter120~140字内 你的字数不够
望取得好成绩
可以用这样一个句式I write to inform you that ~句式更加简洁CONCISE
~will be closed down to make an improvement at 5PM wednesday.我觉得要中间来个时间的插入语,这样比较好吧.
we have to move useful files to other disks因为all the disks that is useful 过于繁琐没有必要
你的商业只是可能需要进一步积累,因为没见你的letter的原题,不好做别的探讨,但是中级要求letter120~140字内 你的字数不够
望取得好成绩
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caijianghuai 幼苗
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Dear All,
The reason why I write this letter is that I have just been informed that our company's computer system will be closed down, at 5 PM on Wednesday to make an improvement ,the improvement ...
The reason why I write this letter is that I have just been informed that our company's computer system will be closed down, at 5 PM on Wednesday to make an improvement ,the improvement ...
1年前
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Dear All,
The reason why I whrite this letter is that I have just been informed that our company's computer system will be closed down at 5 PM on wednesday to make an improvement.
To avoid th...
The reason why I whrite this letter is that I have just been informed that our company's computer system will be closed down at 5 PM on wednesday to make an improvement.
To avoid th...
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