ccgirl
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Last week, I visited London with my parents. The weather in London was sunny and it is good for having a travel. It was also a warm day that we all have a good time there. I visited many interesting of London,such as Big Ben, London Eye , RIver Thames.I have a good time in London.
大致就这样,精彩之处 It was also a warm day that we all have a good time there. 这一句是强调句.还有用了一些短语.
望采纳,谢谢.
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那个,我们作文需要分三段,可以再改一下下吗?改完就采纳哦~
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ccgirl
Last week, I visited London with my parents.
The weather in London was sunny and it is good for having a travel. It was also a warm day that we all have a good time there.
I visited many interesting of London,such as Big Ben, London Eye , RIver Thames.I have a good time in London.
对于50字的短文竟然要分三段,表示无语,,,