英语口语错误改正这是外教给的几个常出的错误,各位帮忙改一下这十个都是有错误的谢谢1. Shanghai has over

英语口语错误改正
这是外教给的几个常出的错误,各位帮忙改一下
这十个都是有错误的
谢谢
1. Shanghai has over ten millions people.
2. Jackie Chan had a grandfather but he didn’t became famous.
3. There was a girl in high school who I like so I write her a love letter.
4. Last year I have been to America.
5. I like so many music.
6. You should stop speaking Chinese in English class if you really aim at speaking English well.
7. Shakespeare is very well know.
8. We are living in the 21 century.
9. I’m local people.
10. I like it when I hear someone to play music.